Memories of You 1

18 Jul

In the memory of you
I become a deer
caught in the head lights
of a 20 tons road train

This is my entry for the Poetry Potluck week 44.

This is my entry for the Poetry Potluck week 44. Thanks to http://www.paintingsilove.com/image/show/207321/deer-in-the-headlights-impact

11 Responses to “Memories of You 1”

  1. Joel Hall July 19, 2011 at 12:06 AM #

    Wow. Whoever “You” is must have done you bad… REAL bad.

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    • Grå Sky July 19, 2011 at 7:36 PM #

      It sure hurts more than anything else Joel. At times, passifying. Falling Down for sure… so beautiful that poem of yours. It really captures the ever going struggle between trust and bearing the hurt when trust is broken, finding meaning when meaningful things are lost. Thanks so much for sharing your own work and your comments.

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  2. Jingle July 20, 2011 at 1:33 AM #

    powerful.

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  3. charlesmashburn July 20, 2011 at 1:56 AM #

    A powerful statement of pain. Awesome picture, too.

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    • Grå Sky July 23, 2011 at 10:09 AM #

      Pain it is for sure, but in sharing and being heard there is relief 🙂 Thanks so much Charles.

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  4. mindlovemisery July 20, 2011 at 1:37 PM #

    Oh wow intense and devastating I know this feeling, Excellent job

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    • Grå Sky July 23, 2011 at 10:08 AM #

      🙂 Thanks so much for your comments, I really appreciate your words 🙂

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  5. Universoul Stranger July 31, 2014 at 3:54 AM #

    Nice one. short, simple yet very powerful.

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    • Grå Sky December 29, 2014 at 6:03 PM #

      Thanks so much Universoul, and thanks for reading 🙂 Happy New Year!

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      • Grå Sky December 29, 2014 at 6:10 PM #

        Im sorry I didnt see your comment before. I tend to lose track and get a bit lost in time when the great waves of life washes over me ❤

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