Memories of You 2

18 Jul

Memories of you
smell sweet like rotten fruit
my mouth water
and my stomach turn in convulsion

This is my entry for the Poetry Potluck week 44

This is my entry for the Poetry Potluck week 44. Thanks to http://danielworthart.blogspot.com/2010/01/two-ripe-and-one-rotten-apple.html

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12 Responses to “Memories of You 2”

  1. Fountains July 18, 2011 at 4:50 PM #

    Ugh, I know exactly how this feels. Wonderfully expressed.

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    • Grå Sky July 18, 2011 at 5:42 PM #

      Thanks so much Fountains, I appreciate it. Yes, far from pleasant :´-S

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  2. Joel Hall July 19, 2011 at 12:07 AM #

    Delightfully disgusting. “You” sounds like such a “sweet” person. Excellently written.

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    • Grå Sky July 19, 2011 at 7:29 PM #

      Delightfully Disgusting, exactemento Joel! Hurt is proportional to love I think, and sometimes hurt can be so bad that it backward-acts, memories becoming bitter sweet, and even poisonous if one cannot let go of that which is lost. It is a struggle, and I cannot tell you how much I appreciate seeing that people out there understand and empathize with this. Thanks very much for reading and commenting 🙂

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  3. Jingle July 20, 2011 at 1:35 AM #

    love this one…

    very brilliant and powerful.

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    • Grå Sky July 23, 2011 at 10:11 AM #

      thanks so much Jingle, I really appreciate your kind words 🙂

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  4. mindlovemisery July 20, 2011 at 3:18 PM #

    I love this especially that opening line, beautifully done!

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  5. Templeton's fury July 24, 2011 at 5:11 AM #

    totally identify. (unfortunately) but u tell it so beautifully….

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    • Grå Sky July 24, 2011 at 8:01 AM #

      Thanks you Templeton´s fury. Just read your Nighttime and I feel moved in recognition. You write beautifully, and I really appreciate you sharing your work.

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  6. Daniel Worth July 24, 2011 at 3:01 PM #

    Classic, using the picture is fine.

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