Before My Feet She Rots

11 Jul

I smell the feces
and blood in the dust

Revisit the gore
of my lady of lust

She came in the way
of gun shots that day

Took a bullet in the head
and dead she lay

I loved her hair
her green eyes shimmer

A death by my hand
couldn´t be any grimmer

Her skin so sweet
her blossom petite

Now rots at the ground
before my feet

http://bluebellbooks.blogspot.com/2011/05/short-story-slam-week-2.html

This is my entry for the Short Story Slam Week 2

Week 5 Short Story Slam Writing Challenge Achievement Award - awarded by Bluebell Books

Week 5 Short Story Slam Writing Challenge Achievement Award - awarded by Bluebell Books

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9 Responses to “Before My Feet She Rots”

  1. Jingle July 12, 2011 at 12:28 AM #

    great, yes, love your entry, you can link in to week 5,

    thanks for the support.
    you rock.

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    • graasky July 12, 2011 at 9:02 AM #

      Thanks Jingle, just linked it in. Will link in the other 3 as well. It´s a pleasure!

      Like

  2. mindlovemisery July 12, 2011 at 9:46 AM #

    Oh wow lovely rhythm very grim indeed

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    • graasky July 12, 2011 at 6:32 PM #

      Thanks so much mindlovemisery 🙂 I didn´t find your entry in there, but the one you did for Slam Week 5 I loved. Beautiful.

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  3. mish July 12, 2011 at 1:05 PM #

    This is a sad poem of love lost !

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    • graasky July 12, 2011 at 9:49 PM #

      It sure is Mish, the hard way indeed. Thanks for your comments! Thanks for sharing your stories too. Just read you short story on the wind and the old lady.. Loved it.

      Like

  4. Grå Sky July 18, 2011 at 6:24 PM #

    Thanks so much Bluebell books! 🙂

    Like

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