In the memory of you
I become a deer
caught in the head lights
of a 20 tons road train

This is my entry for the Poetry Potluck week 44. Thanks to http://www.paintingsilove.com/image/show/207321/deer-in-the-headlights-impact
In the memory of you
I become a deer
caught in the head lights
of a 20 tons road train
This is my entry for the Poetry Potluck week 44. Thanks to http://www.paintingsilove.com/image/show/207321/deer-in-the-headlights-impact
Wow. Whoever “You” is must have done you bad… REAL bad.
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It sure hurts more than anything else Joel. At times, passifying. Falling Down for sure… so beautiful that poem of yours. It really captures the ever going struggle between trust and bearing the hurt when trust is broken, finding meaning when meaningful things are lost. Thanks so much for sharing your own work and your comments.
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powerful.
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🙂
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A powerful statement of pain. Awesome picture, too.
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Pain it is for sure, but in sharing and being heard there is relief 🙂 Thanks so much Charles.
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Oh wow intense and devastating I know this feeling, Excellent job
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🙂 Thanks so much for your comments, I really appreciate your words 🙂
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Nice one. short, simple yet very powerful.
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Thanks so much Universoul, and thanks for reading 🙂 Happy New Year!
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Im sorry I didnt see your comment before. I tend to lose track and get a bit lost in time when the great waves of life washes over me ❤
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