I hear a gasp
and smell the blood
a warm and liquid fume
My nostrils creamy
with the sense
my neurons suddenly bloom
Where am I now
I think to myself
realizing I´m on the ground
The concrete hard
against my face
that no longer seems so round
I notice tree tops
hovering
as if part of the sky
I fly above
and see myself
on the road about to die
A sense of wonder
spread throughout
my body feels so cold
A sudden shake
and lights are out
I let the end unfold
very sincere write, love your talent, you rock.
cheers!
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Thank you so much for your kind words Jingle 🙂 It was one of those poems that appeared almost by itself upon looking at the photo.
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Oh wow I love the intensity of your imagery
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Thanks so much mindlovemisery 🙂 Just read your Dichotomy -loved it!
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I love your interpretation of the prompt – you have written it from a human perspective and in a very unusual and interesting manner – way to go !!
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Thanks so much Mish! I am really happy that you like it. I just read your entry on week 3 as well, and I love the dream story and the panicky feelings that you describe. Thanks 🙂
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Thanks so much Bluebell books! 🙂
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